Thursday, May 14, 2015

Week 7 Readings + Working Thesis Statement

I particularly found the article "Annoying ways people use sources" to be interesting because I am guilty of starting and ending paragraphs with a quote (but not an overly long obnoxious ones). Although I am not like those drivers who know the general rules and practices but just doesn’t care. I agree with the author of this essay in the sense that quotes in the beginning or end of a paragraph can be confusing and disjointed but I also think that if they are used right, they can act as a “hook” or can be thought provoking in the end. I also agree that it is 100% up to the reader as to what they personally find annoying and what they don’t see eye-to-eye on with the writer.

Chapter 20 in Everything’s an Argument was a good reminder of the rules of academic writing, but it did not present me with any new information.  

Just to avoid having to make an entirely new blog post, here is a potential thesis statement in the works:



Happy Dogs Ranch has successfully created a persuasive homepage using the proper genre conventions including a professional structure, tone, language, and by utilizing the concept of pathos to connect with the intended audience. 


1 comment:

  1. I also 100% agree with the notion that it's up to the reader to make up their mind as to what they find effective or annoying. As the author points out, everything they are conveying when it comes to writing are "conventions" – not rules. We can choose the break with convention when we think it will make our writing better. But without knowledge of those conventions are writing can suffer. Great post!

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